Update: Here are the updated rules.
I love writing rules. Writing the rules is often the first thing I do when I begin a new design. Developing the rules is arguably where I spend the most time as the rules are what I'm looking at when implementing changes or developing the prototype. I also update them as I go following every test, or as needed.
I recently tried something new in rules writing, which I thought was interesting enough to share. In addition, I wanted to begin a discussion on providing and incorporating rules feedback. The new thing? I completely re-wrote our rules for Hocus Poker from scratch. Other than one single section, the entire document was torched (figuratively, hooray the cloud!) and set aside.
If you'll allow a brief tangent, I also re-wrote them by hand. On a short flight, I took out my legal pad and a pen and just took to the task. I hate writing by hand beyond sketches and scribbles, so you can be sure my text was concise and well-thought out. That, as an exercise, was very useful. I recommend it.
But, why would I re-write the rules instead of just tweaking the current ones? We've been seriously blind testing the game for about a month now with approximately 10 groups of dedicated testers, a few PNP testers, and local testers. We've had a lot of eyes and different perspectives providing input. Everyone, literally everyone, learns and obtains information in a slightly different way.
The other day while discussing a recent batch of feedback, Josh and I took a step back and noticed our rules were just bulging at the seams. They'd become this overweight monstrosity with dozens of clarifications and strange diagrams. We'd been blown off course!
They reminded me of the United States federal tax Code, a notoriously cumbersome, confusing, and rickety series of laws that fuel taxation software. Our rules had reached a point where players were missing key concepts because their mental space was being consumed by unnecessary additions. It was time for a clean slate.
I had a few questions in my mind while redesigning our rule set:
- Where are the low-hanging fruit? We had a few large sections that needed to be removed, shortened, or integrated differently.
- Where could we showing a visual for what was currently text?
- Where should be be writing what was currently visual? Images take up space and aren't always useful.
- Where was the correct flow of information interrupted? We had a few places where we'd have A, B, F, then C.
- How can this be said simpler?
- Are we already saying this? Are we already saying this? (Remove repetition)
- Does this really need to be a rule? Or a note? Or a clarification? Does everyone need to see this?
As so much time was spent on adjusting the rules, it forced me to consider the root cause. How did we get here in the first place? The short answer is that we took into account almost everyone's feedback.
In the same way that not everyone's feedback should be fully considered and accepted for the design of your game, not all feedback should be introduced into your rules. Josh and I will need to discuss what we do moving forward, but I think we'll need to change how we go about introducing feedback from our many rules commentators.
I think this will be less a problem for Josh, who is the more patient one of the two of us. Ultimately, I want to be receptive to feedback. I know how it can be very frustrating to put work into something for someone, often with no compensation, and see zero changes as a result of your work. I think my hummingbird brain thinks "Oh, I'll make their change! We'll be best of friends." Hummingbird is too harsh. I'm actually more like Dug from Up.
My first proposal is to create a spreadsheet to catalog comments and critiques that don't quite fit. At least not at first glance. We'll list them and take a look every week or so. We'll note how many people shared the comment. If you see a trend, you might want to address the feedback. The lack of a trend doesn't mean you shouldn't address it, but it should be considered more carefully.
Remember: Everyone learns differently. Everyone processes rules differently. Some people fill in the blanks and just run with it. Then again, some people fill in the blanks disastrously. Try to identify personality types and see where they run into issues with your rules. Over time, you should be able to think about these types and fortify your rules for them as you write them.
When you encounter someone whose feedback seems bizarre, talk to them about where they are coming from. It's clear they do things differently than you. As you don't share a brain, that's just fine. You'll be surprised to find how simple some of the solutions are.
A common mistake of many rules editors, which is something I've assuredly done myself, is to identify a section in the rules where someone MIGHT be confused. Basically, you create trouble where none exists. Many people launch into a rules document with their red pen at the ready. We all mean well, like Quixotian rules nerds.
- Someone could think you mean Z when you really mean Y. Consider: What would a reasonable person think in most cases?
- Someone might want to know this information here instead of there. Consider: What do you need here and why?
- You should really list out all of these. Consider: What does that solve? Who does it help?
- Just in case, you might want to confirm what isn't affected by this rule. Consider: How best to clarify, and position such clarification, to reduce repetition and undue complication.
Add these items to the list. Or, use them as the beginning to your discussion. Challenge (politely!) your readers' critiques. In the same way that your rules document isn't yet final, neither is their input. Have a conversation and seek the root cause to solve their concerns as best as possible.
To summarize, never forget who owns the rules: YOU (the designer)! Thank, love, and appreciate your readers, but remember to keep your rules clean, clear, and not Franken-like. Before incorporating a suggestion that seems odd, note it. See if other people mention it. At the very least, use it to start a discussion. Keep in mind that others can and will process information differently. Seek to understand their point of view and improve your rules within reason to accommodate this. Remember that people have a natural desire to help, but that they might "find confusion" where none actually exists. Don't be afraid to ask questions and get to the bottom of things.
In the end, improve your rules with the same thoughtfulness and patience you do the game itself. Otherwise, you may have a document that caters to everyone, but serves nobody.